My homework
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When I was younger, I liked active work or active leisure life, but now I prefer not to move much because my physical strength is low.
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Hello, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to answer the homework question. I appreciate it. I think taking care of your son already gives you an active lifestyle. He will keep you energetic :) Have a great evening. ~Jane
When I was younger, I liked active work or active leisure life, but now I prefer not to move much because my physical strength is low.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: When I was younger, I liked having an active lifestyle or an active leisure life but nowadays, I prefer not to move much because I don\'t have much energy.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: When I was younger, I liked having an active lifestyle or an active leisure life but nowadays, I prefer not to move much because I don\'t have much energy.
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