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I enjoy watching what people do. I can\'t see them too clearly, so I pretend not to see them. I watch not only what people do, but also what they wear. It\'s fun to know the trend to watch them.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! I would describe you as a keen observer then, But be careful some people do not like of being stared or watched at. Take care!
Aki :)
I enjoy watching what people do. I can\'t see them too clearly, so I pretend not to see them.
>>> I enjoy watching what people do. I can\'t see them too clearly, so I pretend not seeing them.
I watch not only what people do, but also what they wear.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I not only watch them but also what they wear.
It\'s fun to know the trend to watch them
>>> It\'s fun to know the trend when I watch them.
>>> It\'s amazing to learn the latest trend by watching them.
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