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2021-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think they don\'t have to get vaccinated so early because they are healthy yet and are so young.

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The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) now recommends a COVID-19 vaccine for children ages 5 and older.

They can protect kids from getting infected with the coronavirus that causes COVID-19. Vaccines are now available for adults and all children ages 5 and older. Everyone who is eligible should get vaccinated as soon as possible.

Occasionally, a vaccinated person may get infected with the virus or even get mild symptoms. This is called a \"breakthrough infection.\" But the vaccine is very good at preventing serious illness, hospitalization, and death due to COVID-19.

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I think they don\'t have to get vaccinated so early because they are healthy yet and are so young.

>> I think they don\'t have to get vaccinated so early because they are still healthy and young.

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