My Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My family is a close friend.
We are kind to each other.
We talk a lot.
We like weekends because we can be together.
My father works almost every time.
My mother takes care of me and my sister a lot.
I and my sister are really closer than other siblings.
I love my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
What a wonderful family you have. Thanks for sharing :)
My family is a close friend.
>> My family treats each other like close friends.
We are kind to each other.
>> CORRECT
We talk a lot.
>> CORRECT
We like weekends because we can be together.
>> CORRECT
My father works almost every time.
>> CORRECT
My mother takes care of me and my sister a lot.
>> CORRECT
I and my sister are really closer than other siblings.
>> Me and my sister are really closer than other siblings.
I love my family.
>> CORRECT
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