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Yes, I think. Because people who have different religions think different things each other.
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Religion is important because it shapes people\'s morals, customs, traditions, beliefs, and, ultimately, behavior. Although not everyone has a religion. Whether you, as an individual, are religious or not, it is important to recognize that many people are and to respect their beliefs.
Yes, I think. Because people who have different religions think different things each other.
>>Yes, I think so because people who have different religions have a way of thinking towards other people.
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