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Does it mean that they are the healthcare system and the national pension? So then, I think we should be mandoate the service. It is a civic duty. That\'s because if we won\'t perform, the result of our life\'s quality will be a significant difference. For our health and the life of old ages, we have to be ready.
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Does it mean that they are the healthcare system and the national pension?
>> CORRECT!
So then, I think we should be mandoate the service.
>> So then, I think we should mandate the service.
or>> Then, I think the service should be mandated.
It is a civic duty.
>> CORRECT!
That\'s because if we won\'t perform, the result of our life\'s quality will be a significant difference.
OR>> That\'s because if we don\'t perform, our life\'s quality will be significantly different.
For our health and the life of old ages, we have to be ready.
>> CORRECT!
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