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2022-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Yes, I think. Because playing an instrument can keep peace in my mind and it can be my new hobby not to be boring. (ps. I think I need some more practice on free talking without a book because I want to be more natural in talking.)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

That true. :)

PS: Thanks for informing me. We will start having more free talking discussions on Friday :)

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Yes, I think.

>> Yes, I do think so.

playing an instrument can keep peace in my mind and it can be my new hobby not to be boring.

>> Playing an instrument can keep our minds at peace and it can be my new hobby for me to not feel bored.

(ps. I think I need some more practice on free talking without a book because I want to be more natural in talking.)

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