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2022-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it needs a tutorial using a computer because many people wander how to use it.

강사 첨삭

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I think those are already existing in computers but that\'s true. Many people are confused when it comes to using technology, especially the elderly people.

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I think it needs a tutorial using a computer because many people wander how to use it.
>> I think we need to have tutorials on how to use computers because many people wonder how to use it.
Or: I think we need to have tutorials on how to use computers because many people wandering around to know how to use it.

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