My homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer public or private transport? Why?
I prefer public transport to public transport. When I go to work, I usually get on the bus. It is very convenient. Because I don\'t have to check my car\' and drive. Besides, I can study English during the time
강사 첨삭
Good Day Miss [이름]!
Thank you for answering the homework! I agree with you. Using public transport is more relaxing than driving because you can do other stuff while on your way. It is also more environmentally friendly that having only a single person inside a car. But there are inconveniences too, like too crowded buses or long waiting lines.
Keep it up Miss [이름]!
-Teacher Violet
I prefer public transport to public transport.
>> I prefer public transport over private transport.
When I go to work, I usually get on the bus.
>> CORRECT!
It is very convenient. Because I don\'t have to check my car\' and drive.
>> It is very convenient because I don\'t have to check my car and drive.
Besides, I can study English during the time
>> Besides, I can study English during that time.
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