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2022-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to see the movie first and read the book later because watching the movie makes me more understanding of the story and after I read the book I\'d like to find some differences between the movie and the book.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:) 

That\'s actually a good idea!

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I want to see the movie first and read the book later because watching the movie makes me more understanding of the story and after I read the book I\'d like to find some differences between the movie and the book.
>> I want to see the movie first then read the book afterwards because watching it can make me understand the story more. And after I read the book, I\'d like to find some differences between the two of them. 

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