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Yes, I have. It was because of the difference of interests. And I think we have to find other things that people equally like to release those differences.
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At some point in our lives, we can feel discrimination from other people but there is always a good way to properly handle it. These things should not affect us in a negative way but let it be something positive that can motivate us to become better people.
Yes, I have.
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It was because of the difference of interests.
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And I think we have to find other things that people equally like to release those differences.
>> And I think we have to find other things that people equally like to identify those differences.
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