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2022-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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People can\'t be always right. People\'s inside changes like their outside do.

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Hi [이름]:)

That\'s true. Every person makes mistakes. Humans are not perfect regardless is you are  older or younger so we have to respect each other equally. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

People can\'t be always right. 
>> People are not always right. 

People\'s inside changes like their outside do.
>> People\'s insides  changes the way the outside changes as well. 

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