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I think the government should change some laws to make people\'s lives much better. \'cause there are so many bad conditions to raise a child, and buy a house in some ways. They have to make more good places and social environments for kids.
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Hi [이름]:)
I\'m sorry to here that. I hope that the government can do something about it.
I think the government should change some laws to make people\'s lives much better.
>> CORRECT
\'cause there are so many bad conditions to raise a child, and buy a house in some ways.
>> It is because raising a child and buying a house it hard to do here.
They have to make more good places and social environments for kids.
>> CORRECT
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