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I think it is dynamite because the inventor of it has regretted the invention, and he said, \"I didn\'t make dynamite to kill people but dig grounds.\" Contrary to his words, however, many people died because of it.
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I think it is dynamite because the inventor of it has regretted the invention, and he said, \"I didn\'t make dynamite to kill people but dig grounds.\"
>> I think the greatest invention is dynamite because the inventor regretted making it and he said, \"I didn\'t make dynamite to kill people but to dig grounds.\"
Contrary to his words, however, many people died because of it.
>>Contrary to his words, many people died because of it.
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