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2022-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'d like to listen the \'My Way\' in 1969, by Frank Sinatra because it is what I was looking for for a long time and it is really good to hear(You should listen to it.)

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Hi [이름]!

That\'s a classic. I used to listen to it a lot when I was young. :) Great choice!

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I\'d like to listen the \'My Way\' in 1969, by Frank Sinatra because it is what I was looking for for a long time and it is really good to hear(You should listen to it.)

>>I\'d like to listen the song \"My Way\" in 1969, by Frank Sinatra, because I was looking for it for a long time and it is really good to listen to. You should listen to it.

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