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2022-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'d like to be more sociable and be kind to others because I want to have more friends in anywhare.

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Hi [이름]!

Yes, that would be a big improvement in your lifestyle.

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I\'d like to be more sociable and be kind to others because I want to have more friends in anywhare.

>> I\'d like to be more sociable and kind to others because I want to have more friends anywhere.

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