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2022-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My dream house is made of eco-friendly materials and it has to be a detached house because I like that I don\'t have to take care of flour noises.

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Hi [이름]!

That sounds like a great house and those are important key points to consider in building it.

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My dream house is made of eco-friendly materials and it has to be a detached house because I like that I don\'t have to take care of flour noises..

>> My dream house is made of eco-friendly materials and it has to be a detached house because I like that I don\'t have to hear noises from the ceilings and floors.

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