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I want to change ways to educate students because people think it is too much to study. For example, foreign study styles are pretty accessible, but the Korean style is too tight for students because it is too tiring.
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I want to change ways to educate students because people think it is too much to study.
>> I want to change the education system for students because they study too much.
For example, foreign study styles are pretty accessible, but the Korean style is too tight for students because it is too tiring
>> For example, foreign study is pretty accessible but the system here is so tight which causes a lot of students to get tired.
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