My homework{12/11}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Some kids want to learn how to ice skate but I learn how to ice skate when I was 7 years old.
2. Did I learned how to walk when I was 1?
3. Anna also learn how to read when her Mum was 35.
4. I learned how to write my name and write my Mum\'s name when I was 4 or 5.
5. Many kids learned how to tie those shoes but I can\'t. ToT
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. Some kids want to learn how to ice skate but I learn how to ice skate when I was 7 years old.
>> Some kids want to learn how to ice skate but I learned how to do this when I was 7 years old.
2. Did I learned how to walk when I was 1?
>> Did I learn how to walk when I was 1?
>> or: Did I learn how to walk at age 1?
3. Anna also learn how to read when her Mum was 35.
>> Anna also learned how to read when her Mum was 35.
4. I learned how to write my name and write my Mum\'s name when I was 4 or 5.
>> correct
>> or: I learned how to write my name and my Mum\'s when I was 4 or 5.
5. Many kids learned how to tie those shoes but I can\'t. ToT
>> Many kids learned how to tie their shoes but I didn\'t. ToT
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