My homework{12/12}
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*Jean, I wrote some essy useing your words.^-^
We were late for the class but teacher Kim was not angry to us, because I said to teacher, \"Teacher Kim! We ran to here more faster then a flying helicopter. Teacher~\" Teacher Kim said, \"Okay. But you could all help me and clean the classroom. Also, you could clean the teacher\'s room. Okay?\" \"Okay........... :( \" We said.
The bell rang for the end of the class. Tomorrow is Saturday. I will run a marathon with Tom and Tim.
Next day, I went to the Olympic park. I will run at there. Teacher Kim and Rosa came. \"Ready, set, go!\"The Judge said. Tom, Tim and I run. I will visit London after this game. \'L-O-N-D-O-N!\' I think. I run as fast as I could. Then..................... I win!!! \"Wow! I win! Thank you, thank you!\"
Then I went to home and packed my bag. And I went to \'The airport.\'
After that, I went to London.
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
*Jean, I wrote some essy useing your words.^-^
>> I wrote some essay using your words.
We were late for the class but teacher Kim was not angry to us, because I said to teacher, \"Teacher Kim! We ran to here more faster then a flying helicopter.
>> We were late for the class but teacher Kim was not angry to us because I said to her, \"Teacher Kim! We ran to the classroom faster than a flying helicopter.
Teacher~\" Teacher Kim said, \"Okay. But you could all help me and clean the classroom. Also, you could clean the teacher\'s room. Okay?\" \"Okay........... :( \" We said.
>> correct
The bell rang for the end of the class.
>> The bell rang to signal the end of the class.
Tomorrow is Saturday. I will run a marathon with Tom and Tim.
>> correct
Next day, I went to the Olympic park.
>> On the next day, I went to the Olympic park.
I will run at there.
>> I will go on a jog there.
Teacher Kim and Rosa came. \"Ready, set, go!\" The Judge said.
>> correct
Tom, Tim and I run.
>> Tom, Tim, and I ran.
I will visit London after this game.
>> correct
\'L-O-N-D-O-N!\' I think.
>> \'L-O-N-D-O-N!\' I thought.
I run as fast as I could.
>> I ran as fast as I could.
Then..................... I win!!!
>> Then..................... I won!!!
\"Wow! I win! Thank you, thank you!\"
>> \"Wow! I won! Thank you, thank you!\"
Then I went to home and packed my bag. And I went to \'The airport.\'
>> Then I went home and packed my bag. I went to the airport after packing.
After that, I went to London.
>> correct
-The End-
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