My homework{12/20}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Com tom is my toothless grandfather.
2. Cat is isn\'t harmless pet because the cat can beat you.
3. My Mum and I likes sugarless candy because that is sugarless.
4.I likes China\'s traditional clothes Chipao because it was butiful.
5. China is warmer than Korea. So I like Korea.(That is false)
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. Com tom is my toothless grandfather.
>> Com Tom is my toothless grandfather. (Names are capitalized.)
2. Cat is isn\'t harmless pet because the cat can beat you.
>> Cats aren\'t harmless even though they are pets because they can bite people.
3. My Mum and I likes sugarless candy because that is sugarless.
>> My Mum and I like sugarless candies because that it isn\'t sweet.
4.I likes China\'s traditional clothes Chipao because it was butiful.
>> I likes China\'s traditional clothes called qipao because it is beautiful.
5. China is warmer than Korea. So I like Korea. (That is false)
>> correct
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