My homework{12/27}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I wants to make a spaceship and ride tham.
2. If I could do anything, I would go to China.
3. I want to buy a bird colled \'Palecon\'.
4. I realy wants to sail a boat!!!! :-) ^^
5. My mum\'s hobby is flying a helicopter.
This photo is \'흔한남매\' photo.
\'흔한남매\' Grop is Youtube star.
Thay are comedyan grop.
It is sister and brother in the contents but actually It\'s not real brother and sister.
Thay were real couple!!!!
Thay are famous for Korean children this days.
I like thay to!!
You could sarch more on \'Naver\'!
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework and sharing the photo! I just checked Google and found out that they are quite famous. I\'m going to watch some of their videos on YouTube tonight. Happy weekend!
Cheers,
Jean~~
1. I wants to make a spaceship and ride tham.
>> I want to make a spaceship and fly it to outer space.
2. If I could do anything, I would go to China.
>> correct
3. I want to buy a bird colled \'Palecon\'.
>> correct
4. I realy wants to sail a boat!!!! :-) ^^
>> I really want to sail a boat!!!! :-) ^^
5. My mum\'s hobby is flying a helicopter.
>> correct
This photo is \'흔한남매\' photo.
\'흔한남매\' Grop is Youtube star.
>> This group is a YouTube star.
Thay are comedyan grop.
>> They are a comedian group.
It is sister and brother in the contents but actually It\'s not real brother and sister.
Thay were real couple!!!!
>> Although they are known as siblings, they are actually a couple in real life.
Thay are famous for Korean children this days.
>> They are famous among Korean children these days.
I like thay to!!
>> I like them, too!!
You could sarch more on \'Naver\'!
>> You could search more on \'Naver\'!
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