My homework{12/4}
학생이 쓴 원문
This is my birthday picture.
From the left (right picture)Kim Min ju, Park Si young, me, Jung Yoo min, Lee Si a, Lee Yoon seo.
In front (right picture)is front (nickname)Sunny and back is (nickname)Ho.
I like this picture because I like birthday party.
And this is My favorit picture ever!!!^-^
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
This is my birthday picture.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: This photo was taken on my birthday.
From the left (right picture)Kim Min ju, Park Si young, me, Jung Yoo min, Lee Si a, Lee Yoon seo.
>> CORRECT~~
In front (right picture)is front (nickname)Sunny and back is (nickname)Ho.
>> In the foreground of the picture on the right, Ho was standing at the back of Sunny.
I like this picture because I like birthday party.
>> I like this picture because I enjoy birthday parties.
>> OR: I enjoy birthday parties that\'s why I chose this photo.
And this is My favorit picture ever!!!^-^
>> And this is My favorite picture ever!!!^-^
-The End-
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