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2022-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it should be disappeared because people are the same. And they should admire their differences.

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I think it should be disappeared because people are the same.
>> I think it should be stopped because everyone has equal rights.

And they should admire their differences.
>> They should also admire their differences.

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