My Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am thankful for my parents because they raised me doing their best and with their love.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you so much for your homework submission. I appreciate your brief and complete response to the question.
It is inspiring that you recognize the effort of your parents.
Thank you also for always doing your best! Have a great night.
~ Teacher Gela
I am thankful for my parents because they raised me doing their best and with their love.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I am thankful for my parents for doing their best to raise me with love.
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