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I always reason music to be stable and to calm down my mind. It is my reward to myself.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this bit of information about yourself. Listening to music is one of my favorite ways to unwind. You can totally try listening to podcast! I am sure you will enjoy it too.
See you in our next lessin^^
~ Teacher Gela
I always reason music to be stable and to calm down my mind.
>> I always listen to music to be stable and calm my mind down.
It is my reward to myself.
>> CORRECT
OR > It is my treat to myself.
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