My Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we are already destroying the world because the world is suffering from humans.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for catching up on your homework.
Unfortunately, our actions and decisions are negatively affecting the world.
Because of this, we need to focus a little bit more on how we can improve the planet we live on.
I appreciate your response to this question. See you tomorrow!
~ Teacher Gela
I think we are already destroying the world because the world is suffering from humans.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I think we are already ruining the world because it is suffering from humans.
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