My Homework
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The world would be destroyed soon because none will be married if they don\'t believe anyone.
Marriage needs belief, so people can\'t marry if they don\'t believe in each other.
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I agree that trust is essential in marriage, and not having trust between people would affect the world.
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The world would be destroyed soon because none will be married if they don\'t believe anyone.
>> The world would get destroyed soon because none would get married if they didn\'t believe anyone.
Marriage needs belief, so people can\'t marry if they don\'t believe in each other.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Marriage needs trust, so people can\'t marry if they don\'t trust each other.
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