My Homework
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I like an easy schedule because I want to have enough time, so I like a slow and easy schedule.
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Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for your homework submission!
You sent me a great answer, and I would like to explain something about it ^^
Your sentence below is an example of a compound-complex sentence-- a type of sentence with two complete ideas and one incomplete idea.
If you have the time, please do a quick research! I am just amazed because this is a progress in your writing! I totally encourage this!
Have a great weekend. See you in our next class!
~ Teacher Gela
I like an easy schedule because I want to have enough time, so I like a slow and easy schedule.
>> I like a slow and easy schedule because I want to have enough time.
OR>> Because I want to enough time, I like an easy schedule, so I can finish on time.
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