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2022-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gela

학생이 쓴 원문

I do what I want to do. Because as I do what I want can make me relaxed and happy. I usually play games or listen to/translate music.

Good evening, [이름]!

I totally encourage you to pursue whatever makes you happy.

I admire that you know how to find inner peace by engaging in activities that bring you contentment.

Please find the time to cultivate this positive feeling this weekend.

Have a great weekend, [이름]!

~ Teacher Gela

I do what I want to do.

>> CORRECT

OR >> I do whatever I want to do.

Because as I do what I want can make me relaxed and happy.

>> Because doing whatever I want can me relaxed and happy.

OR >> I do whatever I want to do because it can make me relaxed and happy.

I usually play games or listen to/translate music.

>> CORRECT

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