My Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are so many kinds of songs I can write! I can write about my life, suffering, and words I want to say to others.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for catching up on your homework. It shows how responsible you are as a student.
I admire how multiskilled you are! I hope I get to hear the songs you write.
Based on your answer, it looks like you are great at writing meaningful songs.
Authenticity is a need in the music industry, don\'t you agree?
See you on Monday, [이름]!
~ Teacher Gela
>> There are so many kinds of songs that I can write!
I can write about my life, suffering, and words I want to say to others.
>> CORRECT
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