My Homework
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All the good teachers who I saw were different. Some teachers were adamant, and others were so soft that everyone liked them.
So, I want to say is teachers need to be flexible. Teachers should be flexible with their students sometimes.
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Thank you for working diligently on your homework.
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~ Teacher Gela
All the good teachers who I saw were different.
>> CORRECT
OR >> All the good teachers who I saw were distinct.
Some teachers were adamant, and others were so soft that everyone liked them.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Some teachers were adamant, and others were gentle that everyone liked them.
So, I want to say is teachers need to be flexible.
>> CORRECT
OR >> So, I want to say is teachers need to be versatile.
Teachers should be flexible with their students sometimes.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Teachers should be flexible with their students from time to time.
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