My homework
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1. School violence can destroy a person\'s life 2. If we want to live well, we must live a community life 3. If it is disorderly, we cannot live a community life 4.I am confused about what to do with my homework.
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Here\'s another corrected homework, Jennie.
Thanks for doing and sending your homework.
See you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
1. School violence can destroy a person\'s life
>> or: School violence can ruin an individual\'s life.
2. If we want to live well, we must live a community life
>> If we want to live well, we must live with a sense of community.
3. If it is disorderly, we cannot live a community life
>> If it is disorderly, there is no sense of community.
>> or: It there\'s disorder, it\'s hard to live in a community.
4. I am confused about what to do with my homework.
>> CORRECT~~
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