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2012-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Today,I will introduce my friend. She is such a braggart. A few students like her. She likes to boast about herself and her family. "You know,my father has a lot of new cell phones. So, I have many new cell phones that my father made." Today at school,she sat next to me during music class. She is boating again! "You know,my flute is made of gold,and it is from Italy. It is very expencive than others." Ah,I'm so sick and boring of her boasting. I can't stand her bragging anymore.

강사 첨삭

HI! Thank you for sending me your composition. You seem so irritated with your friend. Just be patient with her. You were able to express your feeling well. I hope that you had a great day! Enjoy your weekend. See you again.

T.Jane

Today,I will introduce my friend.

>>Correct
She is such a braggart.

>>Correct
A few students like her.

>>Few students like her.
She likes to boast about herself and her family.

>>Correct
\"You know,my father has a lot of new cell phones.

>>She said \"You know,my father has a lot of new cellphones\".
So, I have many new cell phones that my father made.\"

>>Correct
Today at school,she sat next to me during music class.

>>Correct
She is boating again!

>>She was boasting again.
\"You know,my flute is made of gold,and it is from Italy.

>>\"You know,my flute was made of gold and it was from Italy\".
It is very expencive than others.\"

>>\"It is more expensive than other flutes\".
Ah,I\'m so sick and boring of her boasting.

>>I\'m sick and bored of her attitude.
I can\'t stand her bragging anymore.

>>Correct

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