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HI! Thank you for sending me your composition. You seem so irritated with your friend. Just be patient with her. You were able to express your feeling well. I hope that you had a great day! Enjoy your weekend. See you again.
T.Jane
Today,I will introduce my friend.
>>Correct
She is such a braggart.
>>Correct
A few students like her.
>>Few students like her.
She likes to boast about herself and her family.
>>Correct
\"You know,my father has a lot of new cell phones.
>>She said \"You know,my father has a lot of new cellphones\".
So, I have many new cell phones that my father made.\"
>>Correct
Today at school,she sat next to me during music class.
>>Correct
She is boating again!
>>She was boasting again.
\"You know,my flute is made of gold,and it is from Italy.
>>\"You know,my flute was made of gold and it was from Italy\".
It is very expencive than others.\"
>>\"It is more expensive than other flutes\".
Ah,I\'m so sick and boring of her boasting.
>>I\'m sick and bored of her attitude.
I can\'t stand her bragging anymore.
>>Correct
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