My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Group activities help to derive higher knowledge.
>>> Group activities promote deeper understanding and knowledge.
When the average person plans a project, they ice break, and I think that can be a good example.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> When the average person plans a project, they often start with icebreakers, which can serve as a great example.
A person\'s thoughts may have limitations in deriving higher results, but if several people\'s thoughts are gathered, they will be able to derive higher results.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> A person\'s thoughts can be limited in achieving great results, but when multiple people share their ideas, they can achieve more.
Two heads are better than one.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
I trust this words.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> I trust this saying.
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