My homework
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강사 첨삭
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Education is good method for personal ambitions.
>>> Education is a valuable tool for achieving personal goals.
It needs more information to success, and more information needs studying.
>>> It requires knowledge to succeed, and to acquire knowledge, studying is necessary.
But on the other hand, it is good element of development beneficial to society.
>>> On the other hand, education is a key factor in societal development and benefits everyone.
There are all right answer, anybody don\'t say that other opinion are wrong.
>>> All opinions are valid; no one is saying that other viewpoints are wrong.
But, I think education is stronger society side.
>>> However, I believe education is a key strength for society.
If there is only personal ambition, many nations waste a lot of time and money.
>>> If people focus solely on personal ambition, many nations end up wasting time and money.
The reason that they do compulsory education is that it helps the development of the country.
>>> Compulsory education helps with the country\'s development.
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