My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
I don\'t agree.
These arguments are simply blocked if you think about the function of news.
News has an identity that informs events and accidents.
I don\'t think news that keeps an accident secret without informing an incident is news.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don\'t agree.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
These arguments are simply blocked if you think about the function of news.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
News has an identity that informs events and accidents.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
I don\'t think news that keeps an accident secret without informing an incident is news.
I don\'t think news that keeps an accident secret without informing an incident is news.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> To me, news that conceals an accident without informing the public isn’t really news at all.
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