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ESSAY: Nowadays, most countries improve their living standards through economic development. However, some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?
To be honest, a lot goes away.
I agree that this leads to many shortcomings and makes society strange.
However, this is inevitable for the necessary changes.
For economic development, a certain amount of depreciation is inevitable.
However, I think it is important to reduce it to some extent.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
To be honest, a lot goes away.
>>> Honestly, a lot of things disappear.
I agree that this leads to many shortcomings and makes society strange.
I agree that this leads to many shortcomings and makes society strange.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, this is inevitable for necessary changes.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
For economic development, a certain amount of depreciation is inevitable.
For economic development, a certain amount of depreciation is inevitable.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, I think it is important to reduce it to some extent.
However, I think it is important to reduce it to some extent.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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