My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: How did you mentally prepare for basic military training?
First of all, it is important to have a heart of love for the country. I tried to have the spirit of caring for and serving the country.
I also put in a lot of effort to not have any physical problems.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Alex!~
I agree that it depends on your love for your country. Thank you for sharing your opinion~
Chammy
First of all, it is important to have a heart of love for the country.
OR
>> It is important to be patriotic first and foremost.
I tried to have the spirit of caring for and serving the country.
OR
>> I made an effort to embody the values of contributing and supporting our country.
I also put in a lot of effort to not have any physical problems.
OR
>>In addition, I work hard to avoid any health issues.
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