my homework
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HOMEWORK: If you could start your own business, what kind of business would you start?
I personally want to try a food business. Especially, I want to try meat, especially pork, because I like pork.
Along with Korean BBQ dishes, I would like to modify Korean food to make more popular dishes.
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Hello, Alex!
I was surprised to learn that you are also interested in the food industry, even though I frequently hear Koreans want to try their hand at it. Do you cook? Ahhhh... seems fascinating!
Chammy
I personally want to try a food business. Especially, I want to try meat, especially pork, because I like pork.
Along with Korean BBQ dishes, I would like to modify Korean food to make more popular dishes.
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>> I\'d like to try my hand at a food business. I want to try meat, particularly pork, because I enjoy it.
>> In addition to Korean barbecue, I would like to turn Korean cuisine into more widely consumed dishes.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.