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2025-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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HOMEWORK: How can the government help people after a disaster? There are many ways the government can help people. Especially after a disaster, the government\'s help is desperately needed. Disasters inevitably destroy many things. Among them are food, clothing, and shelter, and policies to support them will be needed.

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Hello, Alex!
I appreciate your diligence in doing your homework! Thank you~
Chammy

There are many ways the government can help people.
OR
>> The government can assist citizens in a variety of ways.
Especially after a disaster, the government\'s help is desperately needed.
OR
>> The assistance of the government is greatly needed, particularly following a calamity.
Disasters inevitably destroy many things. 
OR
>>Many things are inevitably destroyed by disasters.
Among them are food, clothing, and shelter, and policies to support them will be needed.
OR
>> Food, clothing, and shelter are a few of these, and measures to help them will be required.

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