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In the event of an earthquake, you will have to run away first. You should run toward the underground and go to a safe space to do nothing.
There are times when you do something and it becomes a big deal. You must do nothing until the earthquake is over.
If you are in a tall building or in the middle of an earthquake, you should hide as much as possible and pray for the earthquake to pass.
If, indeed, an earthquake happens in your own space and a tsunami happens due to it, I\'m afraid you\'d better get the last word
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Hello, Alex!
Thank you for sharing your steps on what to do during an earthquake. I appreciate how you thought carefully about safety in different situations. The last sentence you wrote sounded a little scary, if I understood it right, heheh...but it shows how seriously you take the idea of protecting yourself.
Chammy
In the event of an earthquake, you will have to run away first.
OR
>> In the event of an earthquake, you should move to a safe place first
You should run toward the underground and go to a safe space to do nothing.
>> You should move toward a safe place, such as the underground, and remain still.
OR
>> You should go to a secure location, such as an underground shelter, and remain calm.
There are times when you do something and it becomes a big deal.
>> There are times when your small action becomes a big deal.
OR
>> Sometimes, if you panic and move too much, it can become dangerous.
You must do nothing until the earthquake is over.
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>> You must wait until it\'s over.
If you are in a tall building or in the middle of an earthquake, you should hide as much as possible and pray for the earthquake to pass.
OR
>> If you are in a high facility during an earthquake, take cover under a sturdy table or move to a safe spot and wait for it to pass.
If, indeed, an earthquake happens in your own space and a tsunami happens due to it, I\'m afraid you\'d better get the last word.
>> If an earthquake happens in your area and it causes a tsunami, you must quickly move to higher ground.
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