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2025-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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HOMEWORK KEY: How do you feel when you see someone with a disability in public? >> To be honest, seeing disabled people in public doesn\'t make much of an emotional change. They are the same person and no different. However, there are times when they make them emotionally anxious, which is a little scary.

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Hello, Alex!
I appreciate you sharing your opinion regarding the question. Thank you!
Chammy
To be honest, seeing disabled people in public doesn\'t make much of an emotional change.
OR
>> Honestly, seeing disabled people in public doesn’t affect me emotionally.
 They are the same person and no different.
>> They are the same person and not different.
However, there are times when they make them emotionally anxious, which is a little scary.
OR
>> However, sometimes their situation makes people feel emotionally anxious, which can be a little uncomfortable.

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