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HOMEWORK: What is good about being sociable?
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Before you find anything good about being sociable. I think a person should be sociable. Here, being a sociable person means being a person who meets and interacts with others. Some people find it tiring to meet people, but I want to make sure that it gives them time, not avoiding meetings.
Being sociable gives us a lot. Some can give me a chance, others can give me what I need first.
Socializing means a lot, not just in material things, but in emotional things. You can get emotional stability through conversations with people and get out of frustration quickly.
Socializing is very important in our whole lives.
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Hello, Alex!
I totally agree that we won\'t enjoy being sociable unless we are one, as an introverted person...hehe~ Thank you for doing your homework!
Chammy
Before you find anything good about being sociable. I think a person should be sociable.
>> I think a person should be sociable first before they can enjoy being it.
Here, being a sociable person means being a person who meets and interacts with others.
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>> In this sense, being sociable enjoys being around people.
Some people find it tiring to meet people, but I want to make sure that it gives them time, not avoiding meetings.
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>> Meeting people can be exhausting for some, but interactive meetings are still helpful to attend
Being sociable gives us a lot. Some can give me a chance, others can give me what I need first.
>> Being sociable gives us many benefits, such as opportunities and support that we may need.
Socializing means a lot, not just in material things, but in emotional things.
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>> Socializing is very important for both emotional and material reasons.
You can get emotional stability through conversations with people and get out of frustration quickly.
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>> Talking to others can help you achieve emotional stability and swiftly overcome frustration.
Socializing is very important in our whole lives.
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>> We need to socialize throughout our lives.
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