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HOMEWORK: What kind of people do you think are those who like partying?
I think an active person likes parties. Being active means someone who can talk a lot and likes relationships with people.
I think men or women who can sustain a person\'s relationship can keep it going for a long time without losing their strength in the party.
However, having a party means that it takes money and time, so it is hard to like a party just because it is active.
My idea is that someone who has money, time, and is active would like a party.
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Hello, Alex!
Thank you for giving your insight regarding this. I agree that being active at times is quite costly... Hahaha...
Chammy
I think an active person likes parties. Being active means someone who can talk a lot and likes relationships with people.
OR
>> An active person usually enjoys parties because they like talking and socializing with people.
I think men or women who can sustain a person\'s relationship can keep it going for a long time without losing their strength in the party.
>> I think men or women who can maintain a relationship can keep it strong for a long time without losing energy in social situations.
However, having a party means that it takes money and time, so it is hard to like a party just because it is active.
>> However, having a party requires money and time, so it’s hard to like parties just for being active.
My idea is that someone who has money, time, and is active would like a party.
OR
>> think someone who has the money, the time, and an outgoing personality is more likely to enjoy parties.
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