my homework
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HOMEWORK: Do you think Korean entertainment will stay popular in the future?
I don\'t know. The entertainment industry in Korea is booming right now. But I\'m not sure how long it will be booming.
Korea\'s cultural power is so powerful. Dramas, movies, and more recently, animations are outstanding in the world. However, Korea doesn\'t seem to know how to sustain it. It is necessary to think of the industry involved as one power and cultivate ways to grow and maintain it, but Korea\'s powerful people ignore it. I think culture is like fire. It is burning brightly now, but as time goes by, it will go out and only ashes will remain. I think we need to find a way to sustain it, when it remains.
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Hello, Alex!
I believe that the local support also plays a vital role in maintaining the spark of a country’s entertainment industry. Unfortunately, some people have a cultural mindset where they value foreign products more than their own. :/
Chammy
I don\'t know. The entertainment industry in Korea is booming right now. But I\'m not sure how long it will be booming.
>>I don\'t know, but the entertainment industry in Korea is booming right now, and I wonder how long it will last.
Korea\'s cultural power is so powerful. Dramas, movies, and more recently, animations are outstanding in the world.
>> Korea\'s cultural power is so powerful in terms of dramas, movies, and just recently, in animations, which are becoming worldwide.
However, Korea doesn\'t seem to know how to sustain it.
OR
>> Unfortunately, Korea does not appear to know how to maintain it.
It is necessary to think of the industry involved as one power and cultivate ways to grow and maintain it, but Korea\'s powerful people ignore it.
OR
>> It is vital to consider the industry involved as a single power and develop strategies to build and preserve it, but Korea\'s influential people ignore this.
I think culture is like fire. It is burning brightly now, but as time goes by, it will go out, and only ashes will remain. I think we need to find a way to sustain it when it remains.
>> Correct
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