my homework
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HOMEWORK: What inspired you to choose your current career path?
My career path is a \'computer game programmer\'. The goal is to create my own game, and the reason why I had that career path is pretty simple. Because I enjoyed playing games.
While playing the game, I also felt that I wanted to make a game like this, and that became the first step in my career path.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Alex!
Clearly, knowing your career path is already an achievement. I hope you succeed in becoming what you want to be in life.
Chammy
My career path is a \'computer game programmer\'.
>> My career path is to become a computer game programmer.
The goal is to create my own game, and the reason why I had that career path is pretty simple. Because I enjoyed playing games.
>> My goal is to create my own game, and the reason I chose this career path is pretty simple: I enjoy playing games.
While playing the game, I also felt that I wanted to make a game like this, and that became the first step in my career path.
>> While playing games, I felt that I wanted to make something similar, and that became the first step in my career path.
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