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HOMEWORK: What is a healthy lifestyle?
I think a healthy life is a healthy life for the body and mind.
A healthy life is a regular life. I think doing a set routine at a set time is a healthy and easy life for the body to adapt to.
A healthy life of mind is a smiling life. A person cannot help but be stressed out. It is only important how much you turn that environment into your own motivation.
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Hello, Alex!
I hope we can keep a steady, healthy routine and enjoy a happy life.
Chammy
I think a healthy life is a healthy life for the body and mind.
>> I think a healthy life means taking care of both the body and the mind.
A healthy life is a regular life. I think doing a set routine at a set time is a healthy and easy life for the body to adapt to.
>I think a healthy life is a regular life, where following a routine helps the body stay strong and balanced.
A healthy life of mind is a smiling life.
>> A healthy mind is shown through a happy/positive life.
A person cannot help but be stressed out. It is only important how much you turn that environment into your own motivation.
>> Everyone feels stress, but what matters is how much you can turn that stress into motivation.
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