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I want to travel abroad. I went to China often, but I haven\'t been to other regions often.
If I have a chance, I want to visit other countries in Asia. Countries such as the Philippines, Taiwan, and Thailand always want to visit.
Europe, the U.S., and the U.K. would be good. I think it would be a good study and a good experience.
However, I don\'t want to go to France because I heard a lot about racism there.
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Hello, Alex!
You know, I’m also interested in traveling, but my budget doesn’t allow me to travel freely hahaha...
Chammy
I want to travel abroad.
>> Correct
I went to China often, but I haven\'t been to other regions often.
>> I have been to China often, but I haven’t visited many other regions.
If I have a chance, I want to visit other countries in Asia. Countries such as the Philippines, Taiwan, and Thailand always want to visit.
>> If I have a chance, I want to visit other countries in Asia, such as the Philippines, Taiwan, and Thailand.
Europe, the U.S., and the U.K. would be good. I think it would be a good study and a good experience.
>> I would also like to visit Europe, the U.S., and the U.K. I think it would be a good learning opportunity and a good experience.
However, I don\'t want to go to France because I heard a lot about racism there.
>> Correct
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