my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! Your dad sounds like a
truly remarkable person. It’s wonderful that he not only supports you but also
teaches you to face challenges wisely. Having someone like that in your life is
such a blessing, and it clearly gives you a lot of strength.
-T. Sonny
There is someone who motivates me in my life.
>>Correct!
That is my dad.
>>Correct!
He gives me courage and presents me with wisdom and ways to overcome my past failures.
>>He gives me courage and shares wisdom, showing me ways to overcome past failures.
If you have many difficulties, you are the one who teaches me how to overcome them wisely, and if you cannot avoid them, it is best to enjoy them.
>>When I face many difficulties, he teaches me how to deal with them wisely. And if something is unavoidable, he encourages me to enjoy it.
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